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This Shallow World
Contributed by
all_that_i_can_be
on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:37:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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they say they do
i know they dont
there's no way
that anyone
in this shallow world
could understand
something this deep
they want to help
i know they cant
im by myself
in this shallow world
despite their efforts
im still alone
they've been through this to
i know they haven't
this is a unique kind of pain
that no one else
in this shallow world
could even begin to comprehend
they think it will end
i dont see how it could
but there might be one way
out of this
this shallow world
that i so often hate
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Re: This Shallow World
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by Jane_Doe on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:41:55 AM AEST
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| Your emotions were so strong and moving in this write. People may not be able to feel the same pain as you but there may have been times when their feelings have reached peaks as high as your own. No one can feel the same exact way you do it you know in your heart that they can't. Great write. |
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Re: This Shallow World
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by deepviolet on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 04:09:17 AM AEST
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| awesome poem. everyone has a time when they feel their darkest and no one can ever understand that. just keep strong and things will always work out. |
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