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Broken Rules
Contributed by
HatchetGirl
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Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 01:21:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As I lie next to you in the dark.
Your scent fills the air and I'm lost.
I can feel you eyes staring in mine,
although the darkness makes us blind.
The way I feel controls my actions.
This can't be the same old game,
'cause it seems like the rules changed.
We move slowly closer towards eachother.
We're touching and feeling around.
You bring your mouth up to my ear,
I feel your lip move... and I hear,
'No wandering hands tonight...
We'll use our tongues this time...'
You slide away and a grin comes over my face.
I take full advantage of your offer.
Don't get me wrong you do too...
Let's just say I'm better at it than you.
Your sweet taste fills my mouth.
This makes me feel like we could live forever.
I'm in control... I have all the power,
then you scream and take it away from me.
Suddenly, reality sets back in our blissful minds.
What have we done... What does this mean?
There's no doubt that things will change,
but will our friends still look at us the same.
Two cold fingers fall upon my hot lips.
Your warm breath tickles inside my ear as you say,
'Shhh... No one needs to know about this.'
We broke the rules...
Now we cover our tracks...
And hope for another night together...
Then we can brake the rules again...
To make the original sin not so original...
Because together we've created a new sin...
That is why we have broken the rules...
Copyright ©
HatchetGirl
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2005-08-05 01:21:27]
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Re: Broken Rules
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by Jane_Doe on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:37:32 AM AEST
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| Something that people will be able to relate to in their own ways no matter how well you set the scene. Very good write. Very sad. |
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Re: Broken Rules
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by Zandria on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 07:56:50 AM AEST
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I loved this.
Brava! |
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Re: Broken Rules
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by Kitty06 on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 07:41:04 PM AEST
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| Amazing, how do you come up with this stuff? The flow of your words and the imagery you create are nothing short of astonishing. I could feel the hot whisper as you wrote it, I could feel the cold finger tips. A truly moving write. |
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