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She Is A Book
Contributed by
LickaLolipop
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Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:52:11 AM in AEST
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She is a book. A book so profoundly read the pages once known to be straight are now crumpled with over-use. The book was made with outstanding effort, like nothing ever seen before. From her delicate smile to her succulent peppermint laced lips, she only speaks gently and softly. A lifetime of memories were cut and pasted, strewn into alphabetical order onto the wrinkled sheets of paradise. Pen blotches, drooped and dribbled from one quickening slip, although the beauty of it all never ceases to fade. The cover, swirled to perfection in all different shades. Red lace entwined and a silky lace bow tightly holds it togethor. The vivid colors and vibrant pictures slowly drift off into an off-white shade, they are blank..
More memories are soon to come...
Copyright ©
LickaLolipop
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2005-08-05 00:52:11]
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Re: She Is A Book
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by jmpy84 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 01:22:11 AM AEST
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| expressed well keep it up |
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Re: She Is A Book
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by xxbreathlessx on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 10:55:58 AM AEST
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| whoa. breath-takingly beautiful!!! such a magical write. |
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Re: She Is A Book
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by vibes2go on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:32:29 PM AEST
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| great ..but why not put it into some kind of form? It would be more powerful and beautiful in poetic form .. |
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Re: She Is A Book
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by Kie on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 09:38:16 PM AEST
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Just a thought but if you would place it in a more conformed form and resubmit I really think this would be a HUGE hit.
"A lifetime of memories were cut and pasted, strewn into alphabetical order onto the wrinkled sheets of paradise."
You can definitely write, definitely.
Kie :) |
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Re: She Is A Book
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by LickaLolipop on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 12:20:30 AM AEST
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Thank you so much guys.
You're input means a lot :)
Im making another one right now,
And I also have another poem that is already
posted
Thanks :)
-- Sarah |
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