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Release.
Contributed by
xnoybis
on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:30:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Dancing on the grinding wheel
Forging heart and mind of steel
Waiting on the layer's peel
Stealing every blink to feel
Focus.
Follow me down
Back up and around
To start a new day
On new founded ground
Every step is a birth
Every retreat a memory
Locked in a balance
To provide harmony
Listen.
The whispers of winds
Both enemies and friends
Are pieces of puzzles
to interlocking ends
Down to the wire
The Life and the Fire
The heart beating thread
Connecting the choir
Release.
Learn to let go
The ebb and the flow
A clench is destructive
To that which would grow
Release the mind and
the soul will follow
Shattering the skin
Of all things hollow
Copyright ©
xnoybis
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2005-08-05 00:30:30]
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Re: Release.
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 01:47:26 AM AEST
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You have a talent here. Remember the 3:1 comments to posting a poem though. You want more comments. Comment more on others writes. I really like this line
Release the mind and
the soul will follow
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Re: Release.
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by Zandria on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 08:09:38 AM AEST
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Great write!
I truely enjoyed this! |
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Re: Release.
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by MysticEnchantress on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 11:13:22 AM AEST
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Awesome i loved the reading of this work... very passionate writing. I truly love the way you write with so much passion and force. Thank you for the wonderful gift of your pen my friend.
~E. Cruz |
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