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--untitled--
Contributed by
trini
on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:06:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Bleeding hearts starved from love and care,
Accursed hands stained with acts of treason.
High upon a hill lays the coveted truth,
Buried underneath a mountain of bones.
To find the meaning, first comes the end,
True satisfaction is wrought with guilt.
Albeit the rising tides have caused your death,
Endlessly falling, surrounded by a sea of boundless sorrow.
The future is so unclear, so many "what if's",
But it never mattered when I was yours.
You would always reassure me of a new beginning,
Betrothed to a higher calling.
Copyright ©
trini
... [
2005-08-05 00:06:57]
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Re: --untitled--
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:39:09 AM AEST
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| Interesting, to bad he does not post more of his own work, and the please comment seemed to make me not want to read it but I wanted to give a shot. |
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Re: --untitled--
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by Jane_Doe on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:41:19 AM AEST
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| That was sad but very good. Your friend is a great writer. |
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Re: --untitled--
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by deepviolet on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 04:24:24 AM AEST
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| he's a great poet. the poem is emotional and very descriptive. thanks for sharing it. |
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Re: --untitled--
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by RebelRose on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 05:29:48 PM AEST
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| tell ur friend i really enjoyed reading it and that he should post more of his work |
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