|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Doubts, the Only Certainty
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 10:02:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
|
Is this cowardice that is tormenting?
Or is this unhappiness fermenting?
For all is not certain…
The way in which to walk…
Am I to be found senseless or weak?
Unmotivated with a heart deemed bleak?
Is this teenage angst felt by everyone?
A momentary time of pain, a better day will come?
Will I ever feel the unfelt…?
Or look upon the unseen…
Is my life to be found meaningless?
Am I meant for the path of emptiness?
Is this arrogance why I don’t happily partake?
Am I unappreciative on this day I wake?
No, this is fear to live
Terror to take from this life or to give
Will hope be captured…?
Nothing is ever certain…
The only certain thing it seems
Is my uncertainty
The sad notion seen…
In all solidity.
Copyright ©
pUnKa_RaCh
... [
2005-08-04 22:02:02]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Doubts, the Only Certainty
(User Rating: 1 )
by poisonpen00ad on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 10:06:58 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Yet another fantastic write. The power of emotion is well caught here. Cheers...
C. |
|
|
Re: Doubts, the Only Certainty
(User Rating: 1 )
by brew on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 10:32:01 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Elegant and deep write. Full of powerful emotions. Good post.keep writing.!
Brew~ |
|
|
Re: Doubts, the Only Certainty
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ineedanap on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 10:42:37 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wonderful write. You certainly have a way with words. Great job
Brooke |
|
|
Re: Doubts, the Only Certainty
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 10:48:47 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very powerfull write.
Good work.
huggs,
emy |
|
|
Re: Doubts, the Only Certainty
(User Rating: 1 )
by Zandria on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 08:40:50 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Realization well met! |
|
|
Re: Doubts, the Only Certainty
(User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:19:40 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
How very lucid and impossibly sad Rach-
2nd to last stanza is a monument to sorrow..
You will find the way, trust me on this.
Thoughts and Prayers to You my Friend-
warm hugs~
Billy |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
