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All Is Reminiscent
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 09:58:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Every sound my faint ears hear
Every day that begins anew
Every repeated sight seen
All reminds me of you
Every rose that glistens,
Every sweet scent I smell,
Every time I wake or sleep,
Even in this bed I dwell
Every precious memory,
In every mundane word I say,
Every time I watch lovers,
Every angst-ridden song I play
Every dream my mind does master,
Every time I look upon the ceiling,
You never seem to leave me,
Felt in every anguished or happy feeling
Every touch against my hand,
In every eye I look within,
Every question I always ask,
In every heart I win,
Amongst every painful regret,
Every time I dare to remember,
It’s you I am reminded of,
In another’s kiss so tender,
Every smile I radiate,
Every small tear I cry,
Is because I think of you,
And all that could’ve been
Of you and I.
Copyright ©
pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-08-04 21:58:39]
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Re: All Is Reminiscent
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by poisonpen00ad on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 10:02:22 PM AEST
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I like this one alot. The last line is wonderful.
Great job as always.
Your fan,
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Re: All Is Reminiscent
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 10:10:38 PM AEST
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Heartfelt poem, but you must move on in life. We cannot live forever in a world of 'what ifs'. I know the pain hurts and I know that everything you see, do and say holds a memory, but eventually you have to step forward into a new time and a new love. Hope your heart heals soon.
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Re: All Is Reminiscent
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:52:08 AM AEST
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| A most beautifull, heart warming, heart felt poem, I loved it, sent chills into my heart, the ending was excellent. Keep writing. SLipSiX. |
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Re: All Is Reminiscent
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by brokenwings on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:15:51 AM AEST
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love can be a terrible and wonderfull thing letting go can release your pain,
good poem
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Re: All Is Reminiscent
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by ButchCorpuz on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 03:19:36 AM AEST
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Questions of what could have been
will always recur when love is betrayed,
unexpressed, or forgotten. Just remember,
it is better to have loved and lost, than never
have loved at all. The broken-hearted may
not live forever, but the regretful do not live
at all.
Good poem. Keep writing.
-Butch-
-The Betrayer of Hope- |
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Re: All Is Reminiscent
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by ButchCorpuz on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 03:20:03 AM AEST
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Questions of what could have been
will always recur when love is betrayed,
unexpressed, or forgotten. Just remember,
it is better to have loved and lost, than never
have loved at all. The broken-hearted may
not live forever, but the regretful do not live
at all.
Good poem. Keep writing.
-Butch-
-The Betrayer of Hope- |
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Re: All Is Reminiscent
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:13:54 PM AEST
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I think this would make for an incredible song Rach-
beautiful simplicity..
and so very heartfelt-
B |
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