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The Self Destoryer
Contributed by
Vampire_Slander
on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 09:51:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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World seen though broken blur
these tears flood my eyes
echoing sobs so loud
Terror engulfs my body
so uncontrollable
hazardous screams within
This demon suggestion
games seen by inner eyes
fogging in blackness
Blood crazed fury
mind in hazed shatters
heart bled of desire
This tempest within soul
battle of will and agony
the triumphant clash
Stench of self looms
mirror now in pieces
I am not myself
Heart thumps in direction
eyes gaze for key
found in blade reflection
Shuddering in fear
last resort taken
my final salvation
Horrid creature forsaken
mutilated in dawn
no regrets in death
Slayer of being
ended of pain
I the self destroyer
Copyright ©
Vampire_Slander
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2005-08-04 21:51:52]
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Re: The Self Destoryer
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 10:04:41 PM AEST
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Woah..this is deep material.
Composed so well, your words were well chosen.
Dark, moving and heart-breaking.
Captivating piece, keep it up you possess the talent. |
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Re: The Self Destoryer
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by Archie on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 10:08:18 PM AEST
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I know what it is like to want to commit suicide often it is the tragedy or should I say greater tradegey for those left behind that helps me to come to my senses. I wrote a poem a few moths ago called "And you're gone about a sailor who killed himself as much as I want my pain to end I must go on living for those who will come after me. Your write was very good and I can relate.
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Re: The Self Destoryer
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by Ineedanap on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 10:44:38 PM AEST
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Wow. great pace. I honestkly loved it.
Brooke |
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Re: The Self Destoryer
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:29:54 AM AEST
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wow I LOVE THIS
you just outdone yourself.
awsome |
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Re: The Self Destoryer
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 10:26:51 PM AEST
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wow... this write was superb. i enjoyed reading it even though it is extremely sad and i wish that you didn't have suicidal thoughts.... great write, keep it up!
sending lots of luck and wishes for the best
~sprints |
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