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My Death

Contributed by misunderstood_gurl on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 08:58:32 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



Be nice to me
My death is coming soon
I know now
That it will be at noon
It’s the tricks that people play
That makes us die
I am a victim
And soon I will fly
I will fly high
And free!
Up into the sky
Where no one can bother me!
Up to the place with no worries
Or stress
I will go up there
With all the rest!
I’ll look down on you
And say with a sigh
“I’m fine! I’m happy here!
So please don’t cry.”
But you won’t stop
I can already tell
Because you miss me so much
And I miss you as well.
But up here
I am fine
But I’ll always be yours
And you will always be mine!
Listen to me
I love you
So don’t forget
But if you do
Take out a picture
Of me
Then,
You’ll see
That I’m always there
With you
So no matter what
Remember…
I love you!




Copyright © misunderstood_gurl ... [ 2005-08-04 20:58:32]
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Re: My Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Sherah on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 11:00:49 PM AEST
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Nice writing!! Keep up the good work....


Re: My Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:20:15 AM AEST
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Very nice writing and so sad.
you did good on this piece.


Re: My Death (User Rating: 1 )
by HiddenDeath999 on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:06:28 PM AEST
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nice ^^


Re: My Death (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 10:19:47 PM AEST
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nice write...sad, but good. i enjoyed reading it... and i want to go, yes, but i don't want you to go. please, try to say no and don't leave me in this f***ed-up world by myself... lol... great write, using the title first turned it out well, good job, keep up the great work!

~sprints




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