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A Summers Day
Contributed by
gwenevere
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Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 05:31:56 PM in AEST
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Walk along the sun drenched shore
Waves cascading, oceans roar
Shingle mixed with sand so fine
Scent of oysters, sparkling wine
If you listen hard and long
You will hear the mermaids song
Singing out to one and all
Listen! can you hear her call
Look out at this scene, so free
Where horizon meets the sea
See the haze, the clouds, the sun
Rest and watch, till day is done
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2005-08-04 17:31:56]
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Re: A Summers Day
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by colinbaker62 on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 05:44:56 PM AEST
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Hi Gwenevere, this poem is very in touch with the oceanic aspect of nature, lovely.
What's more, you may not believe this but I have just watched the final hour of Camelot on video, and was listening to the soundtrack on the computer when I came across the pen name 'Gwenevere' on this forum.
Wierd or what ! I may have been King Arthur in a previous life. lol
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Re: A Summers Day
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by Erualaitalmarea on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 06:00:44 PM AEST
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| that was really awesome...your screen name is legend maybe your poetry will be as well someday...good write :) |
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Re: A Summers Day
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by vibes2go on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 06:31:12 PM AEST
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| this was lovely .. |
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Re: A Summers Day
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 07:27:20 PM AEST
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A lovely nature write. Your imagery was very very good. Having lived right on the beach at one time, I could visualize this so easily. The smell of the water that the waves carry in on the breeze, the gulls overhead and going out early each morning to see what gifts the tides had brought in. Splendid work.
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Re: A Summers Day
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by mom11159 on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 11:35:47 PM AEST
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WOW this is beautiful and very breathtaking Your imagery allowed me a visual as I read so wonderful this poem is full of serenity loved every word
excellent job
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