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keep this secret
Contributed by
mand
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Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 05:12:19 PM in AEST
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Im just trying to keep this secret
I'm your secret
I'm just trying to stay calm
during this war within me
everything keeping me
stirred and confused
whirling around
always standing on unsteady ground
hold my hand
and turn your head
dont look in my direction
you'll get lost in my eyes
youre looking into your own reflection
( i dont know, i keep messing with the end... ill get it right at somepoint)
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mand
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2005-08-04 17:12:19]
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Re: keep this secret
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by Erualaitalmarea on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 05:17:53 PM AEST
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| LOL, the ending is fine. I thought it was very good :) |
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Re: keep this secret
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by Archie on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 06:42:14 PM AEST
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| It is almost like you are talking to some one like you when I read this. It is to me a very interesting and thought provoking poem. |
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Re: keep this secret
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by brokenwings on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:35:31 AM AEST
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nice,
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