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Im coming home
Contributed by
Erualaitalmarea
on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 04:52:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Lush green fields and trees abound,
Beckoning me from far away,
Above all the places I have found,
No others inspire me in quite this way,
From the color of every leaf, to every sunset it gives me,
There's no other place I'd rather be,
Its clouds take my breath away as does the moon,
from every moment and experience I swoon,
Its unique and aged buildings I long to see,
No finer town can there be,
I miss the walks at night, just me and the moon and stars,
That was the time when I would heal all my hearts scars,
I feel alive there, I feel truly loved and cared for,
All my friends gather round like one big family,
I could live there for the rest of my life and honestly say I'd be happy,
When I walk it's streets I feel a rhythm flowing through my every vein,
Every street and tree in it I adore,
Even the weather suites me good from sunny to grey with rain,
I love the town I now call home and soon I shall be headed that way,
In two short weeks and a day,
To Moscow, Idaho...
For it sets my heart a-glow
:)
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Re: Im coming home
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 05:17:03 PM AEST
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So lovely, truly. Home is inscribed so deeply in our hearts. I remember when I was getting ready to retire and go "home" for good. It was the most beautiful feeling I had felt in a long long time. This portrays those feelings so well. Thank you for sharing them.
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Re: Im coming home
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:07:03 PM AEST
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| Very nice write, I remember you as Miss Lee, glad you are still around. |
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Re: Im coming home
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by That_Random_Guy on
Saturday, 28th January 2012 @ 12:33:51 PM AEST
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| This poem is absolutely beautiful! |
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