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Rearview Mirror
Contributed by
stew
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Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 04:07:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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everyone has a rearview mirror
that shows them their past
you can look back tot he lessons you've learned
when time just seemed to go too fast.
i've looked in my rearview mirror
more times than you'll ever know
because sometimes you've missed that important lesson
that helped you to grow.
my rearview mirror shows the pain i've suffered
my heartbreaks and tears
going through school
and handling my peers.
my rearview mirror has shown my happiness
the times that i smiled
and got real rowdy
and when my friends and i got wild.
my rearview mirror shows the times that i hid
and didn't come out
for my fear overtook me
there was no doubt.
everyone has a rearview mirror
so don't forget to take a look
at the lessons you've learned
the things you took
and the things you've earned
may your rearview mirror always be clear!!!
Copyright ©
stew
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2005-08-04 16:07:35]
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Re: Rearview Mirror
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by silenceinthestorm on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 04:12:10 PM AEST
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| i like this one alot its a realy good write |
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Re: Rearview Mirror
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 04:23:44 PM AEST
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| I really liked this poem it is very true, but just make sure to never focus on the past keep your mind on the present. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Rearview Mirror
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by anitajames on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 04:39:41 PM AEST
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| I liked your poem. Everything in our past makes us what we are so that rearview mirror is very important. |
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Re: Rearview Mirror
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by gwenevere on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 05:36:29 PM AEST
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| good poem.It is good to have a rear view mirror as long as we don't look to long to the past so that we forget the present and the future, Ros |
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Re: Rearview Mirror
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by solosoul on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 05:37:10 PM AEST
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| i tried to do a write EXACTLY like this one only i was much to young and it didnt come out right so thanks for doing this i can relate to it completely ! |
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Re: Rearview Mirror
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by Bruce on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 01:37:53 AM AEST
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| excellent, you have come a long way and keep up the good work. i always knew you had it in you. |
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Re: Rearview Mirror
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by emystar on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 03:43:09 AM AEST
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Very wise masterpeice.
Keep up the great writing.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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