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alone
Contributed by
silenceinthestorm
on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 03:55:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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nothing
Destroy my life,
Take away my pain,
for in this life i have
nothing to gain.
nothing to hope for
nothing to see
no reason to stand
under the old oak tree
no reason to dream
of summers to come,
of places to visit,
of light of the
sun
destroy my life
take away my pain
cleanse my soul
make me whole
again.
take away my sadness
take away my need.
Take away my
sickness
take away my greed.
destroy my life,
take away my pain.
Bury me now
you won't be to blame.
For, I'm already dead,
As dead as can be.
Like the poor dear lying
Beneath the old oak
tree.
Copyright ©
silenceinthestorm
... [
2005-08-04 15:55:42]
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Re: alone
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 04:00:59 PM AEST
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| A good poem, very good write, the ending topped it all off. SLipSix. |
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Re: alone
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by Stew on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 04:22:36 PM AEST
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is that a picture of you? if it is you're very pretty. but all those things you said about yourself...well, everyone is like that one time or another, so I feel that you shouldn't have to die. however, i really liked the ending about the old oak tree. very unique!
stew:) |
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Re: alone
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by all_that_i_can_be on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 05:06:36 PM AEST
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| its a beautiful poem. great writing. |
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Re: alone
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by vibes2go on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 08:29:44 PM AEST
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| deer, dear. lol ... beautiful poem .. sad though .. perk up!!! Life is really daily for someone your age .. |
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Re: alone
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by silenceinthestorm on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 09:48:50 PM AEST
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| thank you all for your comments . and yes that is me in the pic lol |
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