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Wanting you for my own
Contributed by
Deathly_Rose
on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:52:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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That day that we talked together was a blissful dream,
it seemed so perfect,
the way we talked and laughed,
To do it again would be my greatest dream,
to never see you again would be my greatest fear.
I love the way that when you talked, I could never take my eyes off of you,
and the way that, even in the silent times, I could see your smile.
Sharing that time with you has only made me miss you more,
but if I never saw you it would feel like I never knew you...
I long to see your smile again,
and hear your beautiful laugh..
I just want to lay my eyes on what I once had..
As your friend I want you to know,
that no matter what happens to us you will always be in my heart.
We've been friends for so long,
I never want to lose you...
I will always be your friend even in the hardest times,
You are my friend and I want you to know that I don't know what I'd do without you...
*~I miss you terribly, it's tearing my heart...~*
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Deathly_Rose
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2005-08-04 14:52:42]
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Re: Wanting you for my own
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:59:36 PM AEST
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| A beautifull poem, I loved it, the emotions you used to express yourselves was excellent. |
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Re: Wanting you for my own
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by Stew on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 04:33:26 PM AEST
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i loved this poem and I hope that you show it to your special friend because it says so much about your feelings toward him/her.
stew:) |
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Re: Wanting you for my own
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by Erualaitalmarea on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 04:57:46 PM AEST
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| you spoke the words of my own heart....feelings I had long ago...great write!! |
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