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i'm not fake
Contributed by
Naughtygurl
on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:09:20 PM in AEST
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You say it , but you have from the start
All these false rumors, they break my heart
People say I’m going crazy
But in my mind my thoughts are hazy
I never thought that if I let you in
You’d want out
I never thought that If I love you
I couldn’t really trust you
I feel chained
I feel locked up
I’m broken, just dead
I’m shattered, don’t fret
I’ll be here forever
You could give up but never
You miss me , I was never really here
You love me , You’re the only one I hold dear
Why am I laying here, why am I lost
Why is it cold, its so dark
I have always loved you right from the start
But where are you now
If your not who I thought
And if you loved me
please find me.
And if you need me
Please hold me
Because I’m lost
Because I’m crazy
Will I always be your baby?
So maybe you could live with my mistakes ,
Because that’s all I make
I lack so much
Just remember I’m not fake.
Copyright ©
Naughtygurl
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2005-08-04 14:09:20]
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Re: i'm not fake
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:12:40 PM AEST
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| I understand where you are going with this write. I liked the words and emotions you expressed in it, a great write. |
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Re: i'm not fake
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by ladydp2000 on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:16:47 PM AEST
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Very different and intriguing! I really liked it (:
Blessings!
Dorian |
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Re: i'm not fake
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by je2ica3 on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:57:39 PM AEST
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| i like all the emotion great write |
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Re: i'm not fake
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by vibes2go on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 06:51:44 PM AEST
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| very sad .. |
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Re: i'm not fake
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 03:43:58 PM AEST
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Good write - almost like part of a conversation. You're getting a great start - nice word choices, no spelling mistakes. Best of luck and KEEP WRITING!!!
Blessings, J. |
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