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what it's like to step out your door right into the moon
Contributed by
r.poor
on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
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she is
right there
brilliant
gold
buffed
by the clouds,
her breath
rustles thru
my hair
and i am
lost.....
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r.poor
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2003-01-12 19:20:00]
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Re: what it's like to step out your door right into the moon
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by InexactExactness on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 07:41:23 PM AEST
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I love it in every bit of it's simplicity. Not too much but not too less of a description. Vagueness at times can surely be better than vividness but only when written in the right way...and here you have written this perfectly. Thanks for the read
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Re: what it's like to step out your door right into the moon
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 08:03:53 PM AEST
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| Ooohhhhhh !!! ...... I like it. |
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Re: what it's like to step out your door right into the moon
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 06:46:15 PM AEST
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I like this, it's great in it's simplicity...
I want to take a moment for thanking you. On the old site you commented on one of my poems with "I just want to know, do you dream in colour?" Your comment inspired me to continue writing poetry... and I thank you for it.
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