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For Tara
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 01:16:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You're feeding me memories
with flavourful truth,
warming my heart to a glow
I remember the summers
of innocent youth,
more than i'll ever let show.
I swam in the songs
that we danced along to,
I never felt so alive
You handed out smiles
and i felt they were true,
cause your eyes just couldn't tell lies.
You were the missing piece
to my memories of home,
and all that was happiness there
Now that i've found you
and knowing i was never alone,
i wish i had shown you more care.
Cause I was sad when we faded
like snow in the sun,
I wish my mistake would melt too
But i'll keep you in me
with the memories of fun,
for Tara, it's true...
...this is for you.
Dwayne Wabegijig
Copyright ©
In_a_While
... [
2005-08-04 13:16:35]
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Re: For Tara
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:10:42 PM AEST
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| Good poem, seemed to make me said, though it touched my heart, and I loved the ending, always have to have a good ending on a poem. Good write. SLipSiX. |
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Re: For Tara
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by TaraHill on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:37:06 PM AEST
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That touched me more than you will ever know..Thank you.
T |
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Re: For Tara
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by mand on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 05:05:15 PM AEST
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| i really liked it, nice job! |
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Re: For Tara
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 09:52:24 PM AEST
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*claps*
This is so lovely Dwayne! What a beautiful and endearing tribute...It flowed flawlessly, and your emotions shined through your words---you say you're having difficulties writing lately??? I beg to differ!! I love this stanza:
"Cause I was sad when we faded
like snow in the sun,
I wish my mistake would melt too..."
Wow. Very nicely done Dwayne! I think you may have found a new niche : )
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