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ALL ALONE
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 11:24:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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ALL ALONE
Sitting on a bench
as I walked through the park
A very beautiful lady
All Alone in the dark
I couldn't imagine why
she would be there All Alone
There must have been a reason
but to me it was unknown
I decided at that moment
that I would sit down too
And ask this lovely lady
if there was anything I could do
Do you need any help
or is everything okay
Are you often All Alone
and would you prefer I go away
Your are so very kind
were her words in reply
To even take an interest
you are really a good guy
She opened up a little
with the problems that she had
From the things that she told me
I could see why she was sad
I tried to console her
the best way that I could
Hoping that the advice I gave
would help and do some good
She thanked me over and over
a smile was on her face
She told me she would take my advice
and live her life, at a different pace
I went away smiling
having given a helping hand
Doing what comes naturally to me
and nothing that was planned
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2005-08-04 11:24:12]
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Re: ALL ALONE
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by vibes2go on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 11:32:14 AM AEST
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| nice write; very natural, good flow. |
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Re: ALL ALONE
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by ladydp2000 on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:03:45 PM AEST
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Very nice fantasy write, very entertaining!
Blessings,
Dorian |
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Re: ALL ALONE
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:35:21 PM AEST
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| A very good write, loved it, your chose your words great and they all went along with the poem, fantastic write. SLipSiX. |
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Re: ALL ALONE
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 03:25:44 PM AEST
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Bruce, this is so warm and caring. Just like your heart is.
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Re: ALL ALONE
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by Stew on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 03:58:44 PM AEST
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i just love all your poems because you can tell they come from your caring heart. I love reading them because they make me feel happy. I love this poem because it made me glad there is someone I know i can talk to. thanks!
stewXOXO |
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Re: ALL ALONE
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 01:29:22 AM AEST
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Soul filling to the brim. Helping out your brothers and sisters..
*****I decided at that moment
that I would sit down too
And ask this lovely lady
if there was anything I could do
***** I went away smiling
having given a helping hand
Doing what comes naturally to me
and nothing that was planned
Very nice Bruce..
Your writes are wonderful..
You have a very strong speaker voice..
You sure know how to bring the
character (s) to life and make them very visual.
Thank you.. I enjoyed it very much.
A WAY TO A READER'S HEART IS THROUGH THEIR MINDS. RLPoetess ; )) |
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Re: ALL ALONE
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:32:08 AM AEST
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Like what mommy rita said so warm and loving.
awsome write
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Re: ALL ALONE
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by jmpy84 on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 02:07:26 AM AEST
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| an amazing write keep it up |
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Re: ALL ALONE
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 06:32:15 AM AEST
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You know, at first I thought the Dark Lady was the grim reaper! lol I'm sure glad it wasn't. I like when I can read something without stumbling over parts and have to go back and re-read. Great piece, Bruce. Kudos!
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Re: ALL ALONE
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 03:35:06 PM AEST
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Right on Bruce Really Good write. I like that . Its flow and the word command .Excellent
Whisper |
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