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A Sliver of Wind
Contributed by
imaginary
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Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 10:58:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I wished with all I had for a sliver of the wind
A break, a breeze, a gust of mischievous sin
It came to me softly without a single cry
Creeked open my door, brushed my face, and died
I had longed for the air to cool my swollen hands
To sit in the shade of a tree in calmer lands
Blow away any lingering fear, fury, or guilt
Over ride any stone fortresses I had built
Something strong enough to sweep me off my feet
Then you came, so suddenly, nonchalantly and sweet
I looked to the clouds for a of a sliver of wind
It passed so quickly I wonder, did it ever begin?
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Re: A Sliver of Wind
(User Rating: 1 ) by sprinter27 on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 11:06:38 AM AEST (User
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wow... this is an amazing write. i enjjoyed reading this one and i loved how you expressed yourself. you had well selected words... good write, keep it up!
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Re: A Sliver of Wind
(User Rating: 1 ) by vibes2go on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 11:34:38 AM AEST (User
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I looked to the clouds for a of a sliver of wind
I got stuck on this sentence ..
but the beginning of the poem was beautiful. |
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Re: A Sliver of Wind
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:52:16 PM AEST (User
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A very beautifull poem, I loved the scenes and the express of emotions you used through out the poem a beautifull write. SLipSiX.
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