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Never Hurt Me
Contributed by
Jane_Doe
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Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 05:14:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You have yet to hurt me,
Most needed Malady.
With a torn up heart,
A deserted soul,
A fraying mind,
I am less than well.
But...
You have yet to hurt me,
Most distanced Necessity.
As the cobwebs gather,
The dust cakes,
The silence ensues,
I am waiting alone.
But still...
You have yet to hurt me,
Most hated Desire.
While envy rages,
Resentment lies,
Anger bottles,
I am barely standing.
But don't worry....
You have yet to hurt me,
Most darling Regret,
They are only tears, my Love...
Copyright ©
Jane_Doe
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2005-08-04 05:14:49]
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Re: Never Hurt Me
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by bernard2 on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 06:31:32 AM AEST
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| Tears are the bodies way to remove the aches and pains from the body. Let them flow it will do you good. Good poem keep smiling from bernard2 |
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Re: Never Hurt Me
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by imaginary on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 10:32:56 AM AEST
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I love the thought of this poem, so torn apart but yet so strong. A beautiful example of the strength that exists in women (If the writer is a woman? I only assume by the name.) if not, then thats cool too.
Wonderful. |
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Re: Never Hurt Me
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by vibes2go on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 11:43:27 AM AEST
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| only tears ... very good line. |
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Re: Never Hurt Me
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by ladydp2000 on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:10:32 PM AEST
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Very complex, and nicely written poem (:
Blessings!
Dorian |
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Re: Never Hurt Me
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 03:34:46 PM AEST
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Tears are cleansing rain of one heart. It helps take the edge off of the hurt. It is like we pour our emotions out instead of keeping them dammed up where they can explode in harmful stress and damage us physically and mentally. Lovely write.
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