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Waiting heart
Contributed by
HiddenDeath999
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Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 07:21:42 PM in AEST
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To bleed,
to fear,
to care,
and hide,
to love,
to share,
to be there when you cry.
Darkness feeds on me,
as it pulls away my light,
heart heavy,
hiding from it all.
But i know im here,
waiting for you,
waiting for your care,
im not sure you love me,
you say you do,
it seems real,
but yet your're not there.
Pointless is it,
am i a fool,
what to do when my heart fades away,
wait on you?
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Re: Waiting heart
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 07:43:20 PM AEST
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i really liked this,great poem.And i truly understand you,when you'd give up anything and wait forever,just for a single thing from her.well,hang in there,and keep it up.i wish you luck.
love always,
andrea |
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Re: Waiting heart
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 08:07:30 PM AEST
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| great .. I know these feelings. you express them soo well. |
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Re: Waiting heart
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by EricBRamey on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 11:47:00 PM AEST
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| It's very dark...I too have been to these places and written about it...not fun...letting go is the hardest...we want to wait but we cannot...good write, Eric |
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Re: Waiting heart
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by solosoul on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 12:33:50 AM AEST
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| strong words i like it ! |
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