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The Heartache No One Sees
Contributed by
Shnannon
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Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 01:27:04 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Every moment of my day
Every day of my life
There is some form
Of heartache taking place.
As I watch my friends
Having fun without me.
As I listen to my best friend
Complain about her not quite perfect enough boyfriend.
As I take in everyone elses problems
Without being able to talk about my own.
As I stare at the only person I wish would love me
Love everyone but me.
As I encounter couples very much in love
Not flaunting, but showing the affection I so desperately crave.
And as all of these things take place,
I cry on the inside,
While I smile and laugh on the outside.
If only they could know the pain
And understand how it feels
To be the odd one out
No matter who you're with
Or where you are.
Because on the inside,
Hiding all the time,
Is the heartache no one sees.
Copyright ©
Shnannon
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2005-08-03 13:27:04]
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Re: The Heartache No One Sees
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 02:05:27 PM AEST
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| good job. |
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Re: The Heartache No One Sees
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 02:13:05 PM AEST
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Wow, it's very honest...
i'm sure that a lot of people can relate to it.. including myself.
i thought it was well written and the last line was a strong finish to it all.
take care and keep up the fine writing!!
dw |
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Re: The Heartache No One Sees
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by blackholesun on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 11:35:32 PM AEST
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| oh my god! this is sad,i use to feel like that but then i realized i shouldnt care what others think and be happy with myself,its hard not to hurt because its human nature to stress out,but when you realize that there are people who love you ,AND WANT TO LOVE YOU,THE WAY YOU NEED TO BE LOVED,you will not give up hope on finding that special someone if you love yourself enough to wait and find them.never forget there is someone out there that is waiting on you to find them and love them too.keep faith love will find you,much peace&love britt |
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Re: The Heartache No One Sees
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 01:27:30 AM AEST
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I share your heartache too.I understand you,holding and choking back everything,in a bubble,as if just bouncing off the walls,and nobody even hearing a sound.well,express yoursefl a lot,its good.In me you have a friend,t/c.
love,
andrea |
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Re: The Heartache No One Sees
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 07:37:52 PM AEST
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| As normal your work blows me away. Very good job! You will find your love. I am sure of it |
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