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Dad, Listen
Contributed by
Noelia
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Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 12:30:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Its hard to see,
but I know you love me.
If you could only give me a smile,
I wish youd talk to me once in a while.
I want to know you care,
make memories for us to share.
I want us to be side by side,
you dont know how empty I feel inside.
I want to let you know you hurt me when you start drinking beer,
dont you know I need you to be here.
I wish at least once you had been the one that tucked me into bed,
but you were never there so my mom tucked me in instead.
Daddy I love you,
please tell me you love me too.
I do everything you say,
you know I never disobey.
I just want to spend some time with you dad,
I want us to have the relationship we never had.
Copyright ©
Noelia
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2005-08-03 12:30:54]
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Re: Dad, Listen
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 12:56:06 PM AEST
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Thats a great poem
I can relate to it very well
my dad has a drinking problem
he dont call me anymore
i give you a 9 outta 10 for this poem
good job
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Re: Dad, Listen
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 01:10:47 PM AEST
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good poem i know what your feeling
keep writing
keep smiling
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Re: Dad, Listen
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 02:10:24 PM AEST
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| awww ... that's all I can say. |
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