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Love Gone Bad
Contributed by
bleeding_corset
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Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 08:11:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Words unsaid
All but a sigh
People misled
Living a lie
Tears were shed
Now left dry
Hearts have bled
Questioning why
Emotions are dead
Tis now goodbye
Copyright ©
bleeding_corset
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2005-08-03 08:11:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Love Gone Bad
(User Rating: 1 ) by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 08:38:40 AM AEST (User
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I like it.
Emotive write, very real and honest.
SImple but powerfully composed. |
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Re: Love Gone Bad
(User Rating: 1 ) by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 12:58:53 PM AEST (User
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I am left without understanding except the words unsaid part .. and that gets said a lot .. over used I think .. |
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Re: Love Gone Bad
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 03:20:39 PM AEST (User
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I understand your poem, it is something everybody has to understand in order to deal with. SLipSiX. I understand it. |
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Re: Love Gone Bad
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 04:04:24 PM AEST (User
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I do like it. Very short, but that never is really a bad thing. Good poem, well done.
Take care.
David |
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