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SOMEONE WONDERFUL
Contributed by
Bruce
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Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 07:17:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
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SOMEONE WONDERFULL
When you talk about Someone Wonderful
who comes into mind
Is it that most beautiful lady
you were able to find
How lucky did you get
on that eventful day
When this truly magnificent woman
by destiny,was sent your way
You count your lucky stars
with every breath you take
If this is just a dream
you never want to awake
The two of you together
are like magic in the air
Something wonderful
has made you a perfect pair
A never ending romance
for forever and a day
You can hear and see the love
by what you do and say
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2005-08-03 07:17:41]
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Re: SOMEONE WONDERFUL
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 09:24:07 AM AEST
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This is so lovely. I think every single person is waiting for the Mr./Ms. Wonderful, no matter how old we are. Love really is a magical thing. Has to be, lol, why would so many of us write about it.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: SOMEONE WONDERFUL
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by syenn0512 on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 11:19:43 AM AEST
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You did a great job!...
A very lovely and touching poem
Keep up the good work.
I really like it |
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Re: SOMEONE WONDERFUL
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 01:01:44 PM AEST
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| hmmmmm someone wonderful? someone who .... I wonder now ... nice write. |
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Re: SOMEONE WONDERFUL
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 01:37:00 PM AEST
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Im so happy that your back and posting your beautiful poems they really make me feel warm and happy inside your awesome Bruce!
Michelle |
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Re: SOMEONE WONDERFUL
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by Stew on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 09:27:10 PM AEST
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hey bruce, it's stew, remember? I missed your lovely poems, and I missed chattin' with you. to be honest i haven't really been here in awhile too. I thought I had found my true love or that someone special, but he just left me last night, he's leaving to go to mississippi and told me to feel free to date other people! I don't know how!
stew
p.s. can you give me some advice? |
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Re: SOMEONE WONDERFUL
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by xthrewmyluvawayx on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 12:59:00 AM AEST
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| so very beautiful!!! i loved it!!! |
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Re: SOMEONE WONDERFUL
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 06:01:26 PM AEST
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Oh how true.. wisdom has arisen.
It is a special gift given to each of us.
***** If this is just a dream
you never want to awake
True love does feel like this....
***** You can hear and see the love
by what you do and say
Such a truthful poem.. so sincere.
A very enlightening write.. a very spiritual insight for true love at its best..
NIce question and answer poem..
I like the way you tell the story.. begin it with the who question.. and then showing the what, where, when. The why is the whole write summed up..
Its because when you find that true someone, this is what happens.
RLPoetess ; ))
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Re: SOMEONE WONDERFUL
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by jmpy84 on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 02:05:00 AM AEST
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| lovely write i enjoy your work |
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