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Ocean's Away
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 06:11:52 AM in AEST
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Catching a plane
to another state
Feel your troubles drain
let the waves sedate
Enjoy your break
you deserve it
Release your hearts ache...
I'll miss you more than I'd admit!
A smile on my face
picturing your good time
Take in the relaxed pace
as your spirits climb
Observe nature at it's best
kick up your heels in the sand
Happy times, forget the rest
Have a good time---it's a demand!!
Have a great time Doc ; )
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Re: Ocean's Away
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by sandypoet on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 06:18:26 AM AEST
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| Usually don't read poems about doctors. I think it is nice that you could come up with one with a doctor's demand at the end... IT'S A DEMAND... like it alot..sandy |
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Re: Ocean's Away
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 08:33:25 AM AEST
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| Nice prescription, Scorp....er, um, I mean poem. ;-} |
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Re: Ocean's Away
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 09:40:50 AM AEST
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Scorpy, that is nice. Does he bring you back a souvenier. I always had to bring back little gifts for everyone. It was fun picking something up special for each one. They always told me "well, it is the least you can do after we slave away for you, lololol. I agreed, it was just easier : ).
Hugz
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Re: Ocean's Away
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by Beni on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 10:06:08 AM AEST
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| Great poem....Well done. Unusual to do it about a doctor as well ^_^ |
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Re: Ocean's Away
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 02:22:55 PM AEST
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| Nice write. So you work in a doctors office? Cool. I have been an LPN for 22 years. Though I've been off traveling with Damon the last couple years. We must chat. Peace Laura |
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Re: Ocean's Away
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by brew on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 03:16:18 PM AEST
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Yes.the beach and ocean is a relaxing way to relieve stress...........I know i just got back from the beach, and it was wonderful. You should of went as well. Nice write.
Brew~ |
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Re: Ocean's Away
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 03:34:48 PM AEST
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| Mm the beach and the ocean. I remember when I went to Daytona Beach Florida, the ocean waves is one of the most beautifull most relaxing sounds you could ever hear in life. This was a very good poem, I liked it hope he has a good time. |
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Re: Ocean's Away
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 09:30:01 AM AEST
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another beauty of a poem done par excellance ala scorp, you have a one
and only style, beautiful all i can say
such compassion . . .
((((scorp)))))
Ben |
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Re: Ocean's Away
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 09:59:58 AM AEST
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Love the extra rhyming.
A well crafted sendoff scorp!
Now can you send some of that great verse this way???? ;) |
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Re: Ocean's Away
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by sprinter27 on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 11:12:53 AM AEST
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good write, scorps... work is important, but a vacation now and then is really nice. you expressed yourself well, good job, keep it up!
~sprints |
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Re: Ocean's Away
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 08:12:20 PM AEST
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great poem i love how you
skip lined ryhmed it is awsome
I wish i was going to the beach too
great poem and good job |
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Re: Ocean's Away
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 08:36:52 PM AEST
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Fun poem to read, sounds like it was fun to write. It sends a positive message, plus it has a good flow and a wonderful rhyme scheme.
Well done, Scorp
Will |
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Re: Ocean's Away
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by liquidsunshine on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 05:25:29 PM AEST
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It's cute. It's kind of one of those spur-of-the-moment poems where something happens and you just need to write it down and, being a poet, it comes out in poem form.
I guess, it doesn't have a real professional feel to it like a reflective, introspective poem might.
Love and peace
Chelsea
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Re: Ocean's Away
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by emystar on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:14:02 PM AEST
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Don't know who the Doc is but he must be a great person.
A fine masterpeice of a wish.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Ocean's Away
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:36:34 PM AEST
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A beautifully written poem my friend. Short, sweet and ever so heart warming.
Hugs,
Dreamer |
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Re: Ocean's Away
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by Pisces101 on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:58:43 PM AEST
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| very calming poem. it has a lot of ease through out. |
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Re: Ocean's Away
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by DreamPoetess on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 11:59:04 PM AEST
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Well I just became a writer, am an avid reader for poetry. Now I must say, I can feel what you feel as your wrote this poem, because when its time for my doctor to go on vacation, I miss him and his wife a lot. I kid him when he says he is about to take a vacation, that I helped pay his way, lol. And, you are correct in saying, doctors need a break from their patients, work, and just to go and relax. When my doctor gets back, I get to hear all about the fun he and his wife had, and they do send their patient patience cards when they go on vacation, a real family type affair for all, we are his kids too.
My pleasure to read your poem Scorp, for it is very much a reality write, and nice title to go with, which makes it seem far away for both. My doctor gives me, his other patience a good feeling, before he takes off, so we won't worry, we know he will come home to us to give us more meds, and shots, ouch:>
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Re: Ocean's Away
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 26th October 2020 @ 10:57:06 PM AEST
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Cute??????
You?????
Yeah cute.......🐕🐕🐕🐱🐈🆗🆗🆗 |
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