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Can't You See?
Contributed by
misunderstood_gurl
on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 02:11:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You don’t like me
And I don’t know why
It doesn’t matter
How hard I try
I try and I try and I try
But you just don’t feel the same way
I can hardly stand it
So I cut myself everyday
Nobody knows this secret
Except for me
I don’t even tell my friends
Can’t you see?
But you know now
And its kinda funny that you do
I would never in a million years
Think of telling you
So what do you think now?
Do you think something’s wrong with me?
‘Cause there isn’t. im just in love
cant you see?
I cut myself
Because you don’t feel the same way
And it just hurts so much
That I have to make myself pay
I don’t do it for attention
I do it because of you
It’s a way of expressing myself
So THIS is what I do
You may think that I’m crazy
And that I need to stop
But you gotta see that I can’t
Because I like you a lot!
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misunderstood_gurl
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2005-08-03 02:11:56]
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Re: Can't You See?
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by Urizen on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 06:15:55 PM AEST
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| Very strong poem a lot of emotion and a subject I think a lot of people can sympathise with although most people would perfer to pretend it dosen't exist and lock up ppl who cut themselves as mad, this isn't the case and it's a subject I feel strongly about, I really liked the poem, honest and very brave, thank you for sharing it. |
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Re: Can't You See?
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by sprinter27 on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 11:21:01 AM AEST
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great write! and i totally hope that the cutting has stopped along with your love for him. many have to put up with this and it hurts that we do. and if you hurt yourself that much because of him, i am so glad that he's a part of your past and that you don't like him anymore. great write, keep up the great work!
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