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the best i ever had
Contributed by
solosoul
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Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 08:52:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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the best i ever had
i love it with all my mite
just let me have this only
right .want to hold forever.
never give it up always stay
together. everyday i pray
with all i have from the
bottom of my heart. begging
to keep the best i ever
had forever that is how it
starts. how do i show you
what i say is true your supposed
to know i hear that about you.
there is no better than what i have
nothing even close. i will give
my promise whatever ever it takes.
make it last eternity dont let it go
on the day i never wake. thats all
i need on this earth dont make me go
back to being solo. ive suffered
my fair share more than enough.
tell her i love her i dont have the nerve.
so for her i pray to love me the same
i pray for the best i ever had
i pray this as i call your name
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Re: the best i ever had
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by EricBRamey on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 09:41:51 PM AEST
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| Very heartfelt...a little hard to read...but hey, emotion and grammar don't usually mix. Good write...Eric |
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Re: the best i ever had
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 09:42:16 PM AEST
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| good write. really felt the emotion. |
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Re: the best i ever had
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 10:41:13 PM AEST
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I enjoyed the write and the loving words
Michelle |
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