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Don't want to die alone
Contributed by
Naughtygurl
on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 06:16:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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These tears I’m hiding ,
Hurt so bad
They sting and I feel like
I’m going blind from this pain
Here I am alone
Where it’s dark and cold
And I feel the rain fall down on me
I’m lonely and afraid
I’ve never been so scared
I feel like I’m losing all I have
I’ve lost every part of me,
I wish you didn’t see me
I wish that I wasn’t here
Only an illusion, so that I couldn’t fear
The truth hurts , but lies hurt far worse
And I feel my insides crumble ,
As I lie here in the dark
I’ve fallen inside out,
I’m drowning in this shame
You think that you can help me now
But I wish I was able to be helped
I’m to far gone, your closer then you’ve ever been
And as I shout “ I’m sorry why me”
My screams devour me
So I’m lost all on my own
In a dark cold lonely home
Please find me
Please save me
I don’t want to die alone
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Naughtygurl
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2005-08-02 18:16:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Don't want to die alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Overstated on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 07:08:38 PM AEST (User
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what a powerful write!?! with such a sad ending - 'Please save me
I don’t want to die alone' well written piece of work
feel free to comment on my work also at: http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=Your_Account&op=userinfo&username=overstated
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Re: Don't want to die alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by JennyFruFru on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 08:09:26 PM AEST (User
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ironic you wrote this... i just posted a poem i entitled everyone dies alone... and was looking through stuff and just found yours that you posted only a couple hours before me...
this is a well written piece... i think everyone feels this way... i know i do... i like the line that says my screams devour me... because it is only yourself that is making you feel this way...
it is something we all must overcome...
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Re: Don't want to die alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 09:49:57 PM AEST (User
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this was a very touching write. i liked it a lot. keep writing you have a lot of talent |
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Re: Don't want to die alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 10:48:59 PM AEST (User
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you touched on something I think we all feel at times. Growing old and dying alone . very emotional heartfelt write
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Re: Don't want to die alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by blackholesun on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 11:47:29 PM AEST (User
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no one dies allone is my opinion.no one but the people who have damned thereself,god and the holly spirit and christ are with us whe we die,they are with us at all times ,i know u probably dont want to hear this crap becuz i didnt want to hear it when i felt like i was a gonner.im happy with myself now,i dont let anyone effect me not even myself i just give my pain to god and it feels much better,the poem was well writen but im not paying a compliment on the feeling becuz i think we all know it sux to hurt that bad ,peace&love |
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