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Magic of Evening
Contributed by
gwenevere
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Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 05:45:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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See the daytime meet the night
Darkness blending with the light
Burning bronze at close of day
Softly fades to silver grey
Cobweb mists on velvet cloud
Luminous moon shakes off her shroud
See the Plough amongst the stars
The Bear and planets linked with Mars
Waiting there as evening falls
Imagination softly calls
Miracles of land and sky
Feel your sense start to fly
Sitting here so calm and still
Rest and relax all your will
Lift your eyes and float away
Upwards to the milky way
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2005-08-02 17:45:32]
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Re: Magic of Evening
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by all_that_i_can_be on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 06:15:01 PM AEST
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| it made me smile. total warm fuzzies. i like it. |
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Re: Magic of Evening
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 06:31:14 PM AEST
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| a lovely poem with so great imagery attached to it. i dont think theres one bad line in this poem. good stuff! |
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Re: Magic of Evening
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 07:52:25 PM AEST
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| wow, you really put the reader into the scene! i felt calm just reading it. awesome job. |
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Re: Magic of Evening
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 09:51:11 PM AEST
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| this was a very wonderful write. keep up the good poetry |
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Re: Magic of Evening
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by Erualaitalmarea on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 05:34:30 PM AEST
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| That was awesome, I loved it :), such an imagination |
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