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nonsense
Contributed by
pisces101
on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:11:20 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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She Laughed with a linen smile
Sewn on with threads of hate
at a calender she lives her life by
with out any dates
She hummed a horrid tune
composed of her paternal past
Etching away at the memory
of what used to be such a beautiful craft
walking through damaged walls that
had never been broken, much less fixed.
To find a snowy television
Playing home videos that didn't exist
Staring at the storm,
she sat alone but was in a crowd
The buzzing static hurt her ears
But the volume was turned down
Haunted by so many memories
and given so many plain hints
she cannot put the pieces together,
but somehow her life makes sense.
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2005-08-02 15:11:20]
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Re: nonsense
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by colinbaker62 on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:15:17 PM AEST
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A very fetching poem, and some nice juxtapositioning of contradictions throughout too.
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Re: nonsense
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by all_that_i_can_be on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:21:26 PM AEST
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| that was a really interesting poem. it made me think. im a very good way. i enjoyed it alot. |
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Re: nonsense
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by bethie on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:52:47 PM AEST
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| Interesting write. Alot between these lines. I liked it.i |
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Re: nonsense
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by fireispassion on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 04:29:06 PM AEST
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| nice job it reminds me of something i just don't know what! very nice job! |
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Re: nonsense
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 05:02:59 PM AEST
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| wow.nice work! i love how the poem is built on irony and sadness. i love the words you used, it really created an image. great job! |
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Re: nonsense
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 11:42:01 PM AEST
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This is damn fantastic!! I just love the style you wrote this in! Wonderfully creative and original concept...My fave from you. Very well done!
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