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Dream You
Contributed by
eleventoedsloth
on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 11:46:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Tonight I sleep with one ambition-
to see your face and feel your eyes.
Tonight I rest,
and yet degress
to see the smile of my demise,
and to taste the grin of my wicked hero.
Tonight I lay with little goal,
tonight I hope to dream you whole.
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eleventoedsloth
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2005-08-02 11:46:53]
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Re: Dream You
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:02:51 PM AEST
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| whatever you're doing ..keep it up; I really liked this one.. the last line knocked me out. |
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Re: Dream You
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by Monkeybones99 on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:50:46 PM AEST
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| I think it is a very good poem.....and as the saying goes.....size doesn't matter..lol. |
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Re: Dream You
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:53:08 PM AEST
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| MonkeyBones99 is right! Size doesnt matter ^ ^ It was a gr8 poem...keep it up! |
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Re: Dream You
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 02:10:38 PM AEST
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Very nice and well put together.. i'm absolutely taken by the last two lines of the poem.. very good
keep up the good work.
dw |
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Re: Dream You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 05:01:08 PM AEST
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Well now this is very lovely..
Its nice to be able to turn away from all the other stuff that bogs our minds
This poem gives me some type of clue
that someone else must step down, so that the person resting can fill that void.. after a long time in waiting..
No matter. I love this poem..
RLPoetess ; )) |
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