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Destroying Us All
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 11:04:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You are talking of death,
Causing me a lot of stress,
Your father ruins your life,
Basically stabbing mine with a knife
Life is hard for you to cope,
Making me reach for my rope
I hate to see you live like this,
I’m with you through all of it
But if anything ever happens to you
I am going down with you, too
If you are token from life
I’m killing myself with the knife
If your father would just back away,
We would all make it day-by-day
But with him cutting into your space,
It feels like I’m getting punched in the face
Whenever he causes you pain
Anger drives through all of my veins
I wish that you and I could switch lives
So I could take all the blows and drives
I rather have the pain done to me
Instead of you, don’t you see?
I hate to have to hurt like this,
Feeling like you are falling in an abyss
So when your father hurts you,
The pain is brought to me, too
I hate to see my best friend struggle in life
It always makes me want to grab the knife
But I have to be strong for you
And be next to you all the time, too
I am here when your father causes pain
I, too, have the anger running through my veins
When you father destroys you
He is destroying me too
When he makes you fall
He destroys us all
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2005-08-02 11:04:47]
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Re: Destroying Us All
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:04:31 PM AEST
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| awww .. I hate issues and tissues .. but it's nice you can be strong and be there.. |
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Re: Destroying Us All
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:49:13 PM AEST
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awwww...sad but an awesome poem. I know its hard seeing your best friend go through all that pain and there's nothing you can do but be there for them. You're doing the best you can...Hope everyhting turns out all right.
Gr8 poem by the way! |
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Re: Destroying Us All
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by colinbaker62 on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 05:30:52 PM AEST
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Hi sprinter27. Your devotion for your friend comes across very clear in this piece. However, do you think yhat threatening to kill yourself will help? I mean, you're not going to be able to help if you are no longer here..
Colin |
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