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Butterfly, butterfly...
Contributed by
floo
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Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 09:02:10 AM in AEST
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Butterfly, butterfly
Oh pretty butterfly
Spread your wings
fly away your troubles
Get lost way up in the sky
Butterfly, butterfly
Oh pretty butterfly
You amaze me so
Never come back down
For you shall drown
Butterfly, Butterfly
Oh pretty butterfly
I wish I could be like you
Freedom reigns around you
Bound by no one
Butterfly, butterfly
Oh pretty butterfly
You're everything I want
Everything I wish I cold be
Butterfly, butterfly... my butterfly
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2005-08-02 09:02:10]
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Re: Butterfly, butterfly...
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 10:36:19 AM AEST
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| but dampened wings and a b-fly is no longer free... |
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Re: Butterfly, butterfly...
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 11:08:14 AM AEST
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Very nice.. i like the repetition of
Butterfly, butterfly
Oh pretty butterfly
it's very bouncy, tender and fully of hopes and dreams
keep up the fine writing
dw |
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Re: Butterfly, butterfly...
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by bernard2 on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:32:49 PM AEST
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| Sadly most butterflies only live for one day. Greetings bernard2 |
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Re: Butterfly, butterfly...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:03:34 PM AEST
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| A sad poem, even though the mention of a Butterfly made me happy, because they are such beautifull creatures and the fact that I love animals so much, heh, a beautifull write, keep writing. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Butterfly, butterfly...
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by Bruce on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 07:33:37 AM AEST
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| butterflies have such a short life, fly away into happiness before its to late, great write |
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