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The Two Of Us
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:56:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The Two Of Us
We walk along the beach
The Two Of Us hand and hand
The ocean water at our feet
flowing over the sand
Not a care in the world
as happy as can be
Spending our day together
just loving by the sea
We could not imagine anything
to take the place of this
With the exception, naturally
when The Two Of Us just kiss
When The Two Of Us make love
nothing could be better
Everything so perfect
down to the very last letter
The sun is shining brightly
on our lives as well
Just being with one another
creates a special spell
The magic that is there
when we are together
Will survive over the years
through any kind of weather
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2005-08-02 03:56:14]
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Re: The Two Of Us
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 04:02:15 AM AEST
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| beautiful write. |
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Re: The Two Of Us
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by ButchCorpuz on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 06:17:27 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem. Nice flow of lines.
Keep writing!
-Butch |
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Re: The Two Of Us
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by Floo on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 08:30:13 AM AEST
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| Incredible poem m'dear!!!! both moving and imaginative!!! |
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Re: The Two Of Us
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by bernard2 on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 10:11:12 AM AEST
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| This poem shows love it is a wonderful tribute to all lovers everywhere I really enjoyed this write something positive for a change greetings bernard2 |
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Re: The Two Of Us
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 10:25:04 AM AEST
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| I love writes about the ocean and walking .. nice. |
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Re: The Two Of Us
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by Alibi on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 02:43:07 PM AEST
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| Nice flow to go along with very nice sentiments. This is a touching poem. I did notice a few typos though, so just give it a scan over next time, but otherwise lovely. |
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Re: The Two Of Us
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 07:55:20 PM AEST
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very lovely casts nice pictures in my mond of a couple loving near the ocean nicely done
Michelle |
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Re: The Two Of Us
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by mindset on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 02:36:10 PM AEST
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| yeah then you get divorced and all the words are all bull***** :) twinkle twinkle little star |
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Re: The Two Of Us
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 09:42:23 PM AEST
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Ahhh..the Prince of Romance strikes again!! Loved every bit of this... it is my kind of romantic setting....
(typos will be corrected)
Jenni |
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