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Save Yourself
Contributed by
ceazer2005
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Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:45:37 AM in AEST
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How can you find equality
in a nation that's so divided?
Where do you see meaning
in lives that are so unguided?
How do you discover hope
when the streets are so full of despair?
How do you uncover the truth
when the truth is so unclear?
What happened to the love?
Did we trade it all for hate?
How did we lose our peace,
and then become so irrate?
How can we pray for heaven
when we're living in this hell?
How do you save a people
when you can't even save yourself?
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Re: Save Yourself
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by Taurusgem1 on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:46:26 AM AEST
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| Very good write |
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Re: Save Yourself
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by Ineedanap on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:51:48 AM AEST
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Good perspective. Nice poem
Brooke |
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Re: Save Yourself
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 05:27:08 AM AEST
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| interesting poem did we trade it for hate? great lyric |
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Re: Save Yourself
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by Floo on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 08:29:34 AM AEST
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| Incredible.... both a bold and inspiring piece!!!! |
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Re: Save Yourself
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by trixxx on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 08:41:46 AM AEST
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| nice one, fair enough if you're feeling negative, i think there's still some hope somewhere to be found though :) |
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Re: Save Yourself
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by worldsenigma on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:05:25 PM AEST
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strong write
a lil negative for me
but a good point
nice |
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