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It's your turn now
Contributed by
ineedanap
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Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 02:40:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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All i am is your whore
Your own personal slut
Just insert the right amount of change
And i'll give you a great *****
You've abused my love and trust
And screwed the life out of me
till im bruised and battered
Until my heart bleeds
This time i won't let it happen
No, not to me
This time you'll be the one
Waiting on hand and knee
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ineedanap
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2005-08-02 02:40:57]
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Re: It's your turn now
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 06:07:33 AM AEST
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| love the anger and the words have better luck next time lets hope he doesnt do the same |
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Re: It's your turn now
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by trixxx on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 08:39:58 AM AEST
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nice one, very assertive
that's real affirmative action |
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Re: It's your turn now
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:55:35 PM AEST
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| Angry, angry, angry!!! Love it, love it, love it!!! |
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Re: It's your turn now
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by Alibi on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 02:20:45 PM AEST
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Well this is definitely angry and resentful. I would say it's time to move on, he's not a keeper. You released your emotions very well in this poem.
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Re: It's your turn now
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by lilschizoboy07 on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:52:21 PM AEST
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In my culture we describe this as...Gettuuuumm!!!
And you got 'em. |
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Re: It's your turn now
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by Chilibear on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:01:57 PM AEST
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Great poem, I absolutly loved it!.... And you sure told him. Keep it up girl!
_Chili_ |
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