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The Grass is always greener
Contributed by
taurusgem1
on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 02:26:07 AM in AEST
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Idealistic remedies to your wounded heart
All prepared as you fidget in your dimly lit kitchen
The warm liquid of Grandma’s chicken soup does not soothe;
Instead its heat stings
Blistering, a red sore onto your hopeful comfort
Mastering the illusion of happiness
Harem like, behind dark veils of a concubine’s heartache
You fight subconsciously to be his chosen one, yet
His mistress is unbeatable
His mistress, an unattainable mirror image
Only lets him see the sun highlighting the grass’s greener side
As its blades gently move with the wind of obsession
They reflect a hypnotic need for a superior life
Never showing the worms beneath the surface
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taurusgem1
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2005-08-02 02:26:07]
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Re: The Grass is always greener
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by ceazer2005 on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:11:31 AM AEST
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beautiful poem.
Jake |
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Re: The Grass is always greener
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:51:28 AM AEST
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| what an awsome beautiful write/. |
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Re: The Grass is always greener
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 06:09:33 AM AEST
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| cool poem like the flow nice wording two thumbs up |
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Re: The Grass is always greener
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by trixxx on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 08:38:21 AM AEST
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| i like it, the flow seems to work well, it matches the unsteady and inwardly conentious nature of the subject |
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