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Lonely
Contributed by
misunderstood_gurl
on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:15:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Lonely should be her name
No one there to show her love
Or wipe away her tears
No one there to hold her
Or make her fears vanish
She's broken up inside
And she's screaming for help
But no one can hear her
Over the sound of their own selfishness
They dont even take the time to make sure she's alright
All she needs is someone to love her
And to help her through this lige
Withour someone to help her she'll never make it
I can see her now
She's quickly fading
I reach out my hand
But it's already too late
She's gone
I shouldn't have waited so long
But I didn't realize
How much she needed my help
...Untill now
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misunderstood_gurl
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2005-08-02 01:15:33]
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Re: Lonely
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by poisonpen00ad on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:37:25 AM AEST
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| Great write. |
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Re: Lonely
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by Taurusgem1 on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:55:17 AM AEST
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| Good poem... keep it up |
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Re: Lonely
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by sprinter27 on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 11:29:49 AM AEST
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ouch... sad, but good write. i enjoyed this. and i know what it's like to be lonely- a lot of people do.it was a good write, keep up the work.
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