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What If?
Contributed by
thepizzaguy
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Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 11:29:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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What if Heaven wasn't all white?
What if it wasn't a big dining table,
with a magnificent feast?
What if Heaven, was personalized.
Instead of what everybody thought it was.
God would take a look at your life,
and he would recreate your happy times.
He would put you in the place that made you
the happiest, with the people who made you
the happiest.
You could eat all the food you want,
and never gain a pound.
You could make love to the person you loved
every night,
and every night would feel like the first time.
You could relive any of your happiest moments,
at the snap of a finger.
For me, I don’t know what to believe.
I believe in God, Jesus, and the Holy Spirit.
But as for Heaven?
It might be a feast…
…or it could be so much more…
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Re: What If?
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 11:46:00 PM AEST
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| I'd be Audrey Hepburn .. and I'd be with Gregory Peck .. but still be me .. ya know? and I'd be soooo in love .. like in Roman Holiday .. but it wouldn't say good-bye at the end .. I'd give up the throne and .. yeah .. but I'd be beautiful and he'd love me .. nice idea and lovely write and now I'm crying .. |
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Re: What If?
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 11:52:54 PM AEST
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That is quite an interesting theory. I don't know why people attach earthly actions to Heaven. Still a theory that will be worth discussing at my next luncheon to see others reactions.
Rita |
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Re: What If?
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by brokenandinlove16 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 05:05:36 PM AEST
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| Hey thats not fair .. you made me think... its summer im not supposed to think... good write... now i have to go think or it will bother me...ttyl |
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