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*Mystical fire*
Contributed by
Brandyx7
on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:29:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Red mystical fire
smoke filled room
ruby red lips
stained wine glass
prints of seduction
Smoke filled air
sequins of night
lover’s in love
man in search of
one night passion
Lurking along the
hard wooden floor
dodging stares
sipping slow
I require a taste
for the music
of enchantment
Gentile soul as I
soft and silent
carefree to be
that music of
mystery.......
Copyright ©
Brandyx7
... [
2005-08-01 21:29:00]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: *Mystical fire*
(User Rating: 1 )
by saddarkgirlreingsthenight on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 10:58:23 PM AEST
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| the style is very unique. i really don't understand it, but the language u use it very good. (i'm blonde, so it might just be me..) |
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Re: *Mystical fire*
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by poisonpen00ad on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:12:01 AM AEST
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| Each line is a glimpse of a larger picture. This write is soild and you were able to create the picture with beauty. Wonderful. |
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Re: *Mystical fire*
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:27:07 AM AEST
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Great imagery!! I think this is jazzy and sultry I love it
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