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So... My Feelings Are Boring...
Contributed by
Serendippitty
on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 06:45:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
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So my hearbreak is just like another heartbreak
Typical is the life that I lead
My thoughts and feelings lack expression
Well allow me to proceed
The matter of it is
My heart is still broken
That is whats important
And my feelings were spoken
The fact that you had to say anything at all
shows me the qualities of you
How you are cold, unsympathetic and rude
Your good qualities must be so few
Its not that I care
since your insult was pitiful
Its just that I wonder
how you could be so critical
How you could put a label upon the words
that came from my soul
How you can say that anything poetic is boring
you come out looking like a real hole
So there you have it
you bitter, unemotional witch
Its on now
you stupid witch
Copyright ©
Serendippitty
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2005-08-01 18:45:35]
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Re: So... My Feelings Are Boring...
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:46:14 AM AEST
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| so true ... |
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Re: So... My Feelings Are Boring...
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by poisonpen00ad on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:45:37 AM AEST
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| wooah I can feel your fire.... |
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Re: So... My Feelings Are Boring...
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by Floo on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 08:45:06 AM AEST
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| WOW your poem blew me away... you express yourself wonderfully!!! i love how you write your anger.... so vivd and inspiring!!! |
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