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No title really, just the truth.
Contributed by
Zandria
on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 04:47:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I'm exhausted
finally
and am going to bed
Once again I'll be carrying the same image to bed with me
Same face
Same hands
My constant, that is beoming more and more consuming
My lullaby
My wake-up call
My breakfast image, my lunch companion, my laundry partner, my 'feed the animals, wash the dishes, take out the trash, watch T.V., take a nap, answer the phone'
inspiration.
Copyright ©
Zandria
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2005-08-01 16:47:21]
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Re: No title really, just the truth.
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by colinbaker62 on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 05:09:56 PM AEST
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I like this a lot. Denise my wife frequently complains about such stuff as you allude to.
Oh the joys of marriage !
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Re: No title really, just the truth.
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by ElevenToedSloth on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 05:12:36 PM AEST
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| Woo |
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Re: No title really, just the truth.
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by shelby on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 05:16:51 PM AEST
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loved the style of this makes one think what a day involves
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Re: No title really, just the truth.
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by Mangos on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 05:46:02 PM AEST
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| wow you must be tired, i get upset when i have to make my bed |
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Re: No title really, just the truth.
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by fireispassion on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 06:03:46 PM AEST
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| very nice kinda sounds like my mom telling a friend about her day lol ! |
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Re: No title really, just the truth.
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 10:58:24 PM AEST
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Everyone needs 'inspiration' after days and days of boring routine. Something to look forward too. Nice write. I like this extremely well.
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Re: No title really, just the truth.
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:00:12 AM AEST
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I like the spare wording, and the way you gave it enough breathing room on the page. Simple but well done.
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Re: No title really, just the truth.
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 01:27:34 AM AEST
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Yeah, pretty much...
Take care and miss me.
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