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i have sinned
Contributed by
fireispassion
on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 03:38:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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i ask you once will
you forgive me?
i ask you twice will
you ever trust me again?
i ask you thrice will
you still love me?
i shall ask no more
for i know that if
you do not today
then maybe you will
someday in someway.
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2005-08-01 15:38:08]
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Re: i have sinned
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by colinbaker62 on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 03:55:47 PM AEST
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Interesting indeed, but I can't help but wonder what the heck it was you did. No doubt that's the whole point.
Colin |
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Re: i have sinned
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 04:00:52 PM AEST
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| awe.. such a beautiful write.. i hope indeed he/she will forgive you and love you once again |
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Re: i have sinned
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by Zandria on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 04:58:59 PM AEST
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the hope in this is enough to make an embittered old lady raise an eyebrow.
Good write! |
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Re: i have sinned
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by ElevenToedSloth on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 05:11:00 PM AEST
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Very simple
but good job. |
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Re: i have sinned
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 12:03:25 PM AEST
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| brillant! I love that poem...it has such a gr8 meaning! |
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Re: i have sinned
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by Kie-Kie on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 02:33:19 PM AEST
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I like this!!!!
wow this is a new concept I've never reaaly seen in poems :D
Love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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