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Lost on This River
Contributed by
LolaWhite
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Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 02:56:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Rain on my face
My eyes like dark clouds
Dripping their stormy brew
Striking my cheek with lightening pain
Each drop painfully new
I set sail on the river of tears
Flooding my pain as it floats away
At the end of the river is where I should find you
At the beginning of every new day
Kiss away the rain my love
My body is soaked through and through
Kiss away the pain my love
For I know not what to do
Will you be here again when the sun comes up
And all is fresh and new?
I fear that you will not my love
I'm lost on this river without you
So drown me in all of my sorrow
And choke me with all of these tears
Leave me to die all alone here
Rid me of all of my fears
I will see you again someday
But someday can't come soon enough
So until then I will sail away
On these waters so choppy and rough
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LolaWhite
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Re: Lost on This River
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by colinbaker62 on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 03:26:28 PM AEST
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Very meaningful poem. This is nice
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Re: Lost on This River
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by seci on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 03:38:45 PM AEST
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| i like this poem. i think you have good writng skills. i like the way you used the river as you pain in the poem. keep writng, therefore i will keep reading |
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Re: Lost on This River
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by shelby on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 04:42:06 PM AEST
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such emotion in this write and many can relate to the river of tears I loved how you used emotions and nature together its a perfect fit
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Re: Lost on This River
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 05:06:34 PM AEST
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*****I set sail on the river of tears
Flooding my pain as it floats away
At the end of the river is where I should find you
At the beginning of every new day
Hello Lola:
Suppose there were in the river of tears a very
strong current which drives us, (the boat) caught in
them, with a force that no skill of sailing, or
swimming, with the best wind...
no strength of sails, (oar) pain, could make any
head against, any more than against the largest
currents of the largest river, the absolute power
within us, exist in thoughts, those finest and
subtlest of all waters, that as soon once thought
begins, it forgets whose brain or heart, it belongs
to, which river, which tear, which
day and goes whirling off--- swim we merrily down
the river alone in a direction of self chosen, by law
of thought, and not law of clock.. The river of tears
has its own attraction to which specific direction it
wants to go....
Self direction of thought is the
impulse to search for a particular relationship, our
individuality...
****I will see you again someday
But someday can't come soon enough
So until then I will sail away
On these waters so choppy and rough
This write is so full of emotion... very nice artistic
representation of what it feels like to experience
the emotional life of a human being..
Thank you for posting.. I cannot say enough about
your poetry that would satisfy my need to read
more of your work..
RLPoetess ; ))
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Re: Lost on This River
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by brew on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 05:20:41 PM AEST
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Lost in the rain.........with tears........I am so sorry. Very deep and beautiful , write tho. Hopefully the rain, will dry and the sun will re-appear soon. Can relate to the post.!
Brew~ |
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Re: Lost on This River
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by CarolinaBlue on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 08:36:06 PM AEST
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Lola, this was sad but written beautifully. I know it must be hard with your husband away, but he will return to you safe and unharmed soon. Prayers and Blessings
~Blue~ |
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