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Sad Indeed
Contributed by
Erualaitalmarea
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Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 12:57:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A lonely life is sad indeed,
For love is what I truely need,
Ignored by men left and right,
Crying myself to sleep every night,
I just want someone to care,
I just want someone to be there,
20 years of loneliness is enough,
Every day is tiresome and rough,
Never been on a date, or to a dance,
Never been asked out, or given a chance,
I suppose I do not exist,
So along this sad and lonely life I shall drift,
Will any man ever care?
Will any man ever dare
To break through my chains that bind,
My heart, soul and mind?
They have been built up day after day,
Year after year,
It's always been the same way,
Lonely all the time, my only companion is a tear,
I long for a love to call my own,
The kind of love I have never known.
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Erualaitalmarea
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Re: Sad Indeed
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 02:33:27 PM AEST
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| men aren't what they are cracked up to be .. get a vibe .. it can't break your heart .. won't lie .. and it can give an orgasm ..:-) |
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Re: Sad Indeed
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 04:06:10 PM AEST
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| Someday you will find you a man who will love you for you and you wont have to feel lonely anymore.. it may take a while but somebodys out there for you! |
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Re: Sad Indeed
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 06:22:36 PM AEST
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Your expression was good in this write, and I could feel your emotions when I read this...However, some of the rhyming came across a tad forced, which hampered the overall feeling behind this, and there was a typo...'Truely' is spelled 'Truly.' All in all, nicely done. Keep it up!
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