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Just Want to Fly
Contributed by
sylviawalters
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Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 06:24:45 AM in AEST
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Why shouldn't I try?
I just want to fly
Fly away from this place of broken dreams
Away from this collection of silent screams
Escape from the wishes that will never come true
an't I just fly into the sky so blue?
I'll soar like a bird, across the skies
I'll get away from these evil lies.
Why can't someone just understand?
Sometimes, we just need someone to hold our hand
Why can't I just try?
To fly away across the sky?
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2005-08-01 06:24:45]
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Re: Just Want to Fly
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by Row on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 06:28:03 AM AEST
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| the idea of flying and escaping is always so good, it's a nice poem, i liked it |
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Re: Just Want to Fly
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:45:45 PM AEST
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| everyone wants to fly, but nobody ever writes about it .. great job.. |
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Re: Just Want to Fly
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by colinbaker62 on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 04:35:47 PM AEST
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Hia Sylvia, this is lovely escapism. It reminded me of the time my youngest daughter Brittany was playing 'Superman'. (She was around 3 years old). Anyway, she was merrily playing in the back garden, when suddenly my wife and I heard a scream. You see, Brittany had tried to fly from the top of a small flight of steps and succeeded in landing on her face. A bit worrying at the time but funny to look back on. Obviously she assumed that as she was playing at being Superman, she would be able to fly.
Colin |
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Re: Just Want to Fly
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by bruised_angel on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:49:19 PM AEST
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| i love the rythm n love the poem |
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Re: Just Want to Fly
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by brokengirl on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 12:23:47 AM AEST
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| so many times i have wanted to fly away cuz then everything will be okay it seems. i like the poem. makes me think of how i just want to fly away from here. |
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