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More than One Eternity
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 02:45:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I am whole
And completely vulnerable
When ever I am around you
I could be so easily broken
More so when are the reason
Why I have wings
I love you so
So much more than anything
More than anything or anyone ever
You are my whole world
My angel you have a name
Robin and with that name
My hopes and dreams fly up
And all doubt remains below
I know that you love me
That is all i can ever need
You are the cure to all
That makes me ill
I am alive
Only because of your
Sweet kisses on my
Tired desperate brow
From your eyes I
Take my nourishment
From your lips
All can be reborn
Only by your side can I rest
For we are how Shelly wrote
One spirit with two frames
And one hope with two wills
That is how we will always be
I belive that we can last
Perhaps for more than just
One eternity
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Re: More than One Eternity
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by Mild_Tempest on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 02:49:49 AM AEST
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| GREAT WRITE!! I LOVED THE END! |
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Re: More than One Eternity
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:42:42 PM AEST
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| thanks for posting this ..really like your style!!! |
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Re: More than One Eternity
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by Gothchyk on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 05:22:18 AM AEST
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| awe, you still have not lost your touch, amazingly beautiful, muaw |
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Re: More than One Eternity
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 03:48:16 AM AEST
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One can feel the tender, luving passion in these words.
So sweet.
huggs,
emy
A masterpeice of a luving heart, body, soul. |
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