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Any Second Now
Contributed by
ElevenToedSloth
on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 02:08:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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"Nothing Special"
He screamed it in her ear,
The Wisper Heard Around the World
"You're nothing special, and I wish you'd just go away."
Maybe it was never really said at all,
but her eyes read his like a large printed book...
blinking red lights.
She pretended not to notice,
and wondered if her own eyes flashed stories of the hammer to her heart.
"I'm sorry", maybe?
Maybe they told of remorse.
Remorse of a ruined relationship, that was never really whole.
Did her eyes give away her own secrets?
Did her own eyes decieve her,
like his decieved him?
Did they tell the world that she would sleep tonight,
mearly to dream his firey face?
She hoped they didn't,
but knew he knew her somewhat better than she knew herself.
He could read her more-so like a billboard,
than a book.
She was an easy subject,
and lacked a poker face.
Her face was probably flushed with crimson,
and her eyes that deeper blue they got before she spilled over.
He could probably tell she was to burst,
any second now.
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Re: Any Second Now
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by Ineedanap on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 02:24:15 AM AEST
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| Wow. Im kinda left speachless after ur poem. It made me feel such a strong emotion. I absolutely loveed it!! |
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Re: Any Second Now
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 03:19:07 AM AEST
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words are ripped out of me, very good write, i loved this poem, spoke to my heart,
tasha |
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Re: Any Second Now
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by brew on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 05:43:41 PM AEST
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Well that is what i say all the time.......Look at ones eyes and you can see all.....member its the window to the soul. Very good post, tho. Liked all the words..the scernio behind them.
Brew~ |
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Re: Any Second Now
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by ElevenToedSloth on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 11:41:03 AM AEST
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I thought this was one of my blander, cleche poems... yet everyone seems to like it over the good ones.
What's up with that people? |
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